27 January 2010

Silencing Vancouver

I was in Vancouver, British Columbia, the first time an agent expressed an interest in one of my novels.  She raised an eyebrow at the title, nodded as I gave her my pitch, and then asked me for 50 pages to read, "and the first chapter with the American character in it."  I knew immediately that she wasn't going to like that book.  At least the setting-- small town anywhere-- wasn't as much of an issue.

I've had a good number of conversations with other writers about where their books are set.  Obviously many of the writers who come to the Surrey International Writers' Conference are Canadian, but even there the general consensus on setting seems to be: "make sure it's a place that could be any American city."

Straight down

The idea about Vancouver, unlike New York or London or any number of international cities where fiction is set, is that Vancouver is supposed to be dull.  Or something.  Unacceptable, anyway.  Too Northern and too Canadian, maybe.  It's gorgeous but a bit forgettable, a void ready to be filled with whatever other city's personality the artist wants to summon.

I'm as guilty of this as anyone.  When I write about a city I usually call it "the city."  I wonder what I'm afraid of?  I know I don't want to scare agents or publishers from taking on my work because they're worried American or other international audiences won't recognize the place.  But are readers really that easily confused?   And is Vancouver really so unremarkable?



Television shows are often filmed there, because it's cheaper and easier to get in to locations, but also because it's beautiful and atmospheric and kind of amazing.  Hence the sci fi:  X-Files, Supernatural, Stargate, Fringe... even "Cylon occupied Caprica" on Battlestar Galactica took advantage of the gorgeousness of the Vancouver Public Library.  But even when they're set on Earth these shows rarely admit where they are within the story, because somehow that would put off viewers.

The most illuminating example, for me, is Highlander.  The show skipped back and forth between Paris and Vancouver.  In Paris there was a whole history and depth of setting to draw on, known events and characters from reality, a flavour to the city.  But when it was in Vancouver it was just "a city," nowhere particular, dubbed "Seacouver" by fans to show that although it was obviously Northwest America, it might have been Seattle rather than Vancouver (though it wasn't,) so don't be confused.  Washington license plates and US flags were dropped into the shot whenever possible.  But what about the Gold Rush, sawmills, First Nations, and feminism?  Chinatown, drugs, fire, rich men and their trains?  What about Gastown, Granville, Kitsilano, the Coast Salish, Simon Fraser, and False Creek?



I now live in London, England.  There's obviously tonnes of history and plenty of fiction that shows it.  For example Audrey Niffenegger's Her Fearful Symmetry was based here, though the author doesn't live here, and that felt obvious to me: the descriptions were a tourist's description, an outsider's view.  I don't want to write like that.  I don't yet know London well enough to write as if I do.  My latest work in progress is based in Vancouver, the neighbourhood somewhere near Kits, stuck in beside English Bay.  "The bay" in "the city."  Do I want to erase its personality that way?  Or should I admit Vancouver into my story, its flavour and history and everything that it is, and tell interested agents, "This is where the story takes places.  The setting is not interchangeable.  And the reader will like the story better because it was based here.  They'll see the truth in it.  Trust them."

It's a gamble.

10 comments:

  1. This is an interesting question. A story set in a particular city will draw on the feel of it, London necessarily different from Seattle, Sao Paulo, Beijing or Green Bay, Wisconsin. A story set in a particular city, with lots of local flavor, might sell a bit better there. Agents must be thinking that making it generic will broaden the appeal.

    It's a struggle, since ultimately, the story should really come first.

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  2. Hi Jen,

    I've recently written a satirical mystery set in Vancouver AND London. We'll see if it goes anywhere!

    [Hope you are enjoying your new home!]

    ~kc dyer

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  3. I think you're right Tony. The city is going to affect the story, and I guess a lot of agents don't believe Vancouver has an internationally-interesting story in it. It's a shame.

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  4. Thanks for stopping in, kc! I know your story will go somewhere. I'm looking forward to reading it, especially with that setting! And even though you've retired as MC I hope you still come by the SIWC. It wouldn't be the same, otherwise.

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  5. I'd say write it where the story needs to be set, whether that's an imaginary rural county like Yoknapatawpha or some Saramagian unnamed country or a Beckettian bare room or Vancouver. Wherever it needs to be.

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  6. I think a story needs to be where it needs to be (but I'm aware that that kind of statement is darn near pithy.;-)).

    Interestingly, my experiences re: agents' opinions on where my stories are set are different than yours. All mentioned disliking "Anywhere, North America" and were excited about me setting it (previous novel) in Vancouver.

    And recently, I've come even closer to home: my own rendition of Terrace, renamed, so I can take as much creative license as I want. ;-) Agents I've pitched to (so far) have no problem with northern BC.

    Perhaps the secret lies not so much in choosing the _right_ location as it does in making sure that the storyline--what the characters ultimately want, need, etc--transcends place and time and speaks to most humans regardless of where they live. And you do the latter BEAUTIFULLY, so it's just a matter of finding the right agent, not an ethnocentric one. ;-)

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  7. Thanks, Cons. The consensus here seems to be: the story is the thing. I like that much better than "pander to expectations!"

    Ev, I love your/our renamed Terrace. Although I think you've been better than I have. I usually tried to make it seem like it could be a Northern yet not necessarily Canadian town. Shame on me, really.

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  8. In many Australia novels (I cite them because a. I'm an Aussie and 2. I've become more interested in my local literature) the setting becomes a quasi character and it shapes the way the characters interact with each other, the way the narrative unfolds and the general atmosphere.

    I also believe we need to trust in our characters to know where they live and from where their stories told.

    The issue of setting is an interesting one. When we created CW last year we asked all the writers to 'keep it generic' ... but we realised pretty soon on, we couldn't dictate where the characters wanted to reside and we ended up with "Any Town" in North America. The turning point for pinning down the location was the use of security guards (of all things) on a uni campus.

    Nick Earls (one of my favourite Aussie authors) said he always felt a bit squeamish about setting his stories in his hometown of Brisbane - a bit of the cultural cringe of being in the shadow of the more cosmopolitan Melbourne and Sydney. The first story he set in Brisbane, was the first novel to be accepted for publication - and he said it was because there was an autheniticy to a story which is based somewhere you know initimately - and a place you love.

    Since then, I've tried in my mainstream fiction to say, this is brisbane, this is a city I love, it is vibrant, amazing and I'm not ashamed to write about it. The more writers who are true to their location, and readers who acknowledge this, will counter the need to make a place generic.

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  9. "The more writers who are true to their location, and readers who acknowledge this, will counter the need to make a place generic."

    Well said Jodi. And as the world is getting smaller via new methods of communication, hopefully publishers and readers will be (or seem) less biased about encountering unfamiliar settings.

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  10. Jodi, I meant to say also that one of my very favourite novels (Oscar & Lucinda) is written by an Australian and based mostly in Australia. I read it when I was quite young and hadn't been anywhere but home, yet because of the wonderful characters it was still accessible to me, and I loved learning about the new places. I guess there's an early lesson I forgot to learn.

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